The Curse - First attempt of my Daughter as a writer!!!

As a proud mother, I feel absolutely delighted to post the first ever story written by my 8 year old daughter, Millie. Here it goes:

Once upon a time, there lived a cute princess called Ashley. She loved playing a particular tune on her flute. Every morning she played the same sweet tune on her flute. Listening to that tune, all the birds started to dance. And the kingdom of Ashley was very near to a forest. In the forest there lived a little wicked dwarf who hated the tune of the princess. He wanted to kill Ashley. So one day, the dwarf came to the kingdom. After Ashley played the tune the dwarf entered her room and made Ashley senseless. And he gave her a big sand timer of one hour. By that way, a prince called Hans was passing the kingdom on his horse. When Hans was passing the kingdom, he saw Ashley who was senseless. He also knew the same tune and he had a flute too on which he played the tune and he also saw the dwarf. So Hans went to the room of Ashley and played the tune before the dwarf. Listening to that tune Ashley woke up and the prince killed the dwarf. And then Ashley and Hans got married and lived happily ever after.